Descriptive Writing

WALT use descriptive features in our writing. We will know we are successful
 when we use …

• Strong adjectives
• Similes
• Onomatopoeia

This is my dog Finn he is a black Labrador x huntaway. Finn’s as black as a shadow. This is a photo of Finn he loves to go for long walks and chew things like sticks, tennis balls and lots of other things. He is incredibly mischief so you have to keep watch of him like an eagle. I take him to a black sand beach everyday. When he barks it sounds like a powerful lion’s roar. He is as fast as a sprinting cheetah in a race. When he sprints he is as fast as a yellow lighting bolt. His collar is orange and bright yellow, he has light blue tag on his collar. Finn has a dog best friend and she is call Gemma * she is a pure breed lab. They go on walks together. They both love to chase cats. As soon as I turn the corner…...
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