Best Part Of Me

Best Part Of Me 

Learning Intentions

I am learning to use language features to make my writing interesting and engaging for the reader.

I am learning to think carefully about the words I use so that my writing is descriptive and engaging
for the reader.

I am learning to add an appropriate visual to my work

I will be successful when I can show….

-I have used some language features to make my writing interesting and engaging
(smile, metaphor, alliteration, onomatopoeia, rhyme)

-I have carefully chosen some interesting words to include in my writing

-I have some descriptive words in my writing (adjectives)

-I have added a photo to my writing

I like my feet because it would be really hard to run if
you didn't have any. They walk me every night to bed.
They hold the light, blue shoes that I wear and help me
thump on the ground and I must say they make a sound. The bones in my waewae are  rocks that cling onto my legs and make my feet really strong. I like my feet because
they move up and down and side to side. I also like
my feet because they are as fast as a cheetah. My feet are
definitely the best part of me.